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spew 2
ilenelush

lost
 1
unable to revel
 2
just mimic smiles
 3
nod and accept
 4
gracious yet distant
 5
person to person  
 6
to persona
 7
usually hidden
 8
behind walls of space and time
 9
shielding scenarios better left
 10
unplayed
 11
as our needs misread
 12
un-wanted signs as maybes  
 13
perception alters to reality
 14
grand passions fade to black
 15
while spot lights shift
 16
to simple words on unlined pages
 17
comfort zones
 18

5 May 07

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