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Dark Burn
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As the rain leaves,
 1
his true colors blind,
 2
as though aflame.
 3
Will he crumble?
 4
Will he sustain?
 5
NO!
 6
He wil become what he was,
 7
the bug upon the wall.
 8
Awaiting his death.
 9

4 May 07


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