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Forever
horsie

I wrote this because I was thinking of death, which is something very vain, but in a way also very calming and relaxing. I find that surpisingly think of it alot, but I was also thinking of the one person I love, and may never be with, and somehow about Angels and I pray to God every night, for my dream to come true, that I will be with him Forever (the title)

I am NOT emo or goth, though some of my very close friends say I am at times.....


I sit there, waiting.
 1
Waiting and waiting.
 2
Will I ever see him again?
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I ask myself,
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I ask myself Forever......
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*Sigh
 6
The sand tickles my toes,
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As I trot along the beach.
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The sun setting,
 9
My favourite time of day,
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The time of day Forever...
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*Uck!
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I cough as a cold blade,
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Deletes my life for always.
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I won't see him agian.
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I tell myself the truth.
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Which I knew all along,
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All along Forever............
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But I will,
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Be watched by God, My lord.
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And get to watch,
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Over my love.
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Watch over Forever.......
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My name is Unknown.
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My love is a Mystery.
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I died painlessly,
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As tears stained my cheeks,
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Now stained Forever.....
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To you, I am no one.
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To Earth, I am their Angel.
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Sworn to watch over,
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As their Guardian...
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Guarding Forever........
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As my curse.
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And my blessing,
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By the one I kneel to
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Pray to and worship.
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Kneeling Forever........
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2 May 07


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