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Sunflower Dance
spacetangent

Of all sheltered nature
 1
A Sunflower did bloom
 2
Warmth and tender
 3
My cheek only knew
 4
 
 
Emit rays of radiance
 5
Weather constantly attained
 6
Let petals dance and ride
 7
Smooth breezes of prairie  
 8
 
 
Sun now high, too hot
 9
Craving water for drink
 10
Sip sip sip my precious
 11
Oh, Petal to hand my sunflower
 12
 
 
Now plunging and spiraling
 13
Yellow petals to floor
 14
“Hello tender wind and
 15
Goodbye sweet perfume”
 16
 
 
Don’t forget this time
 17
Another year departed
 18
Winter comes again
 19
Oh no dear affectionate flower
 20
 
 
I dread once more
 21
Fault in these red hands
 22
Losing you is similar to
 23
Dropping a glass world
 24
 
 
Terrified is this weather of mine
 25
A year’s knowledge with
 26
Previous years to learn,
 27
Yet nothing changed
 28
 
 
Sorry dear sweet
 29
How tearful it is for us
 30
A parade of petals for you
 31
Tainted clear tears for me
 32
 
 
Sad to say another time over
 33
Next year perhaps
 34
A year’s time to patch your petals
 35
Hope I bloom
 36

I'm sorry.

2 May 07


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