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Incense
aerol

Mourn the caliphs in their vases,
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humour the greeks on their pots,
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he sniffs kerosene in a parking lot,
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slut, could've had me, then got voted off.
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29 Apr 07


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bump
 — aerol

"Then got voted off."

Is this about reality TV?

I like it.
 — propoet50

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