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Memories of Imagery
ashley87

Reflections of my face
 1
Crystals
 2
Prisms of light
 3
Rainbows dazzling
 4
refractions
 5
Clear crisp sound
 6
Tastes of mountain springs
 7
Reminders of good
 8
Visions
 9
Raw blue
 10
sky
 11
Excitement
 12
joy
 13
Purified soul
 14
Blank
 15
fresh page
 16
Start anew
 17
 
 
Conscience
 18

28 Apr 07

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wow 'raw blue sky' ... niiiiiiiiice.

i like this poem and the structure suits your ideas to the T.
i think the structure you have chosen is the apt way of putting down memories of imagery.
 — trochee

Thank you! I'm glad that it is appreciated.
 — ashley87

hey ashley remove the footnote... let the reader form his own opinion. dont guide him...
well thats what i feel personally...
its your gizmo.
 — trochee

Will do. Thanks  for the suggestion.
 — ashley87

Footnote removed ^^
 — ashley87

i like the pace your poem sets. fast, choppy, straight to the point. bluntly elegant ha ha.
 — crismonblue

Thank you, Crimson.
 — ashley87

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