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Democracy
wanderlusted

This was written as a joke. I claimed to my friend, who is fluent in French, that I could babble French-sounding syllables and it would mean something. So, we made a poem from my random ramblings and his interpretation, and this was the outcome. The title of "Democracy" was for a cheesy, dramatic effect. To all those who speak French, this is grammatically incorrect and messy, I know. It was just all in good fun.

On sainte du point.
 1
Vetu sait, vetu seau.
 2
Couru-tu?
 3
Va si ma teau vu.
 4
Du ça! Du ça! Du ça!
 5
 
 
On saint from the bridge.
 6
Worn knowledge, worn soul.
 7
Did you run?
 8
Go if my skin has seen.
 9
From that! From that! From that!
 10

26 Apr 07

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i love it.
 — bear

tis fun
 — PollyReg

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