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with a glass of orange juice
sggunal

fast, saw my eyes like eggs  
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served sunny side up  
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dripping runny right up  
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unto my mouth  
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crinkled like bacon  
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my favorite way of breakin
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18 Apr 07


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cool, really like where you are coming from with your poems.
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:)) And I love gettin comments!
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