| In His Place |
MelissaK
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To dress in Black
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To don high heels
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To hear click-clock
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To pull on stockings
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To stride about
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To snap suspenders
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To do, not shout.
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To see submission in his eyes
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To tease and torture, tantalize
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To stalk my prey, by him unseen
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To swish that cane
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To hear him scream
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To bring him to that special place
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To do what I know I do best
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To be myself, still the unrest
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That lives in me, deep in my soul.
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14 Apr 07 |
Rated 6.5 (7.3) by 4 users.
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I'll put you in your place, bitch.
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Manhater
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This is not poetry.
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This sucks.
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WHAT?
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Shavedcunnie?
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Subject not proper. Structure is childish. Not good.
— JerryReed
For once, I agree with Jerry.
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SHIT. Like what inutile writes.
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Melissa is probably inutile's "girl"
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I like it. I like the structure and sequence. I like the wording. I like the language. Good poem.
— hairlesscunn
Hairlesscunn will give you a blowjob.
— unknown
To be repetitive.
Seriously, you've got to cut down on that repetition.
— FangzOfFire
The repitition is what makes this particular poem. Pay no attention to Fangz
— unknown
Makes it a poorly written poem, you mean.
— FangzOfFire
Do you have a way I can contact you LOL A real power poem.
Larry hit me with your rhythm stick Lark
— larrylark
I like how you start each sentence with the word two. But you should have done it all the way. Beginning the last sentence with the word that does not fit.
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want to screw?
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WOW
Highly charged and do you charge?
Larry expense account Lark
— larrylark
No charge, Larry.
— MelissaK
too too too too many toos - duh duh duh = are yu fur real dingbat
— unknown
The to's are need, dumbshit. I see nothing wrong with this poem, except I am not into BD.
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Melissa wants to fuck larrylark
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What posseses someone to write something like this?
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