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hazards of crashing a noisy MENSA meeting
unknown

"high IQ" he said
 1
cough murmur yawn atishoo
 2
"Hi i like you too."
 3

  

http://wakeewookoo.blogspot.com/


12 Apr 07

Rated 8.3 (8.3) by 6 users.
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Haa v funny. too smart.
 — unknown

charming senryu
 — banditfemme

hi i like this.
 — unknown

do you often talk
with a baked potato
in your mouth?
 — banditfemme

haiku
likeyou
iq

thank you
 — unknown

what is mensa?
 — jumpoline

mensa = v smart peeps
 — unknown

i was kidding, dear, but thanks. :)
 — jumpoline

nice poem.
 — hank

hanks hank
 — unknown

aww this was very clever. bravo.
 — lanezfairy

thanks!
 — unknown

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