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Clarity
CheBourdain7

Peace of Mind
 1
is
 2
nothing
 3
but a self conscious
 4
woman
 5
giving a man
 6
she admires
 7
on
 8
a first date,
 9
mix signals,
 10
bitch defenses
 11
and games
 12
to determine
 13
if he
 14
is indeed
 15
" THE MAN".
 16
 
 
Yet,
 17
he does not
 18
get rattled
 19
and like
 20
a simple sailor,
 21
whethers
 22
the storm
 23
and eventually
 24
enjoys the calm
 25
serenity
 26
of the sea.
 27

29 Mar 07

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wonderful
 — grahmike

So, is Clarity the character in the second stanza?
 — BrideInBlack

clarity

occurs
when a couch
potato
let his over entitled
insecure bitch
whine until she
is exhausted
so they
can enjoy
the calm
serenity
afforded by
his laziness
and her
attrition
 — unknown

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