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Entrapment
unknown

at intersections,
 1
eyes swing away
 2
then
 3
slyly creep back,
 4
corrupting innocent
 5
observations
 6
as admiring facts.
 7



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29 Mar 07

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hmmm
yesyes
it's the worst when the intersection is near a high school...
i ain't gettin' any younger
are we?
L4 creep
that's great
 — chuckles

meh
 — unknown

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