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i was going to ask him that day
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but then
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i was going to ask him everyday of that week
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but then
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my life has a tendency to absorb.
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i didn't ask
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he never knew
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he still thinks my name is georgia
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and he could still be perfect.
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29 Mar 07 |
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nice little piece, ha.
would get rid of that 'so'...
— varun
you're right. something was wrong and i just couldn't pick it. thanks v.
— unknown
Short. Sweet. Ace. Nine.
— karmic
why that lone fullstop?
v.
— unknown
full-stop are better without this poem is better without them
— varun
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— varun
short and sweet, a really like this one
— grahmike
there are two full stops varun, after the closure of each stanza...should i rid myself of both?
— unknown
Nidely turned out poem.
— larrylark
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