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sevenling- your glance is deliciously tangible
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Your glance is deliciously tangible
 1
Your voice reaches pitches that make my skin tingle
 2
Your laughter makes my stomach tighten
 3
 
 
I pray to God, Satan, and half-rusted deities
 4
for someone to give me the opportunity
 5
to be stupid
 6
 
 
I bet it would feel like flying
 7

28 Mar 07


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