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Angelic Lady
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Sunlight dances upon her skin.
 1
A classic ballet of grace.
 2
Elegant steps, light as dandelions,
 3
tip-toes upon her face.
 4
 
 
Illuminated by the touch of one star,
 5
she gazes upon the sight.
 6
Narure beholds a masterpiece before her
 7
set in the Monet sky.
 8
 
 
Magnolias float in the clear ocean blue,
 9
adrift majestic peeks.
 10
Ivory petals bloom in heaven,
 11
falling one-by-one in peace.
 12
 
 
Resting upon her angelic presence,
 13
she bathes in the midst of a breeze.
 14
Cleansed by the breath of God,
 15
she surrenders to sweet release.
 16

27 Mar 07


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