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part of your collection
changeling

will the one on one
 1
be a mistake
 2
even though I seem to trust you
 3
it felt so good when our shoulders touched
 4
 
 
still I wonder
 5
if you're playing me
 6
 
 
how many others do you
 7
touch in a day
 8
 
 
in that way
 9
that seems so innocent
 10
yet deliberate?
 11
 
 
am I reading too much into this?
 12
 
 
am I walking into your kiss
 13
of death
 14
rejection
 15
 
 
am I just part of your collection?
 16
 
 
I guess we'll see.
 17

27 Mar 07


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