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part of your collection

will the one on one
be a mistake
even though I seem to trust you
it felt so good when our shoulders touched
still I wonder
if you're playing me
how many others do you
touch in a day
in that way
that seems so innocent
yet deliberate?
am I reading too much into this?
am I walking into your kiss
of death
am I just part of your collection?
I guess we'll see.

27 Mar 07

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