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raped by an angel
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hello darling
 1
don't scream don't scream
 2
    he says
 3
there's more to it than you know
 4
 
 
golden angel come to rape me
 5
guess I should be used to it
 6
by now
 7
 
 
bright light washes over my skin
 8
while you tear into me
 9
tumultuous rage spills from my pores
 10
 
 
messenger of God
 11
disciple of filth
 12
 
 
after
 13
you try to take care of me
 14
wash me off
 15
bundle me up
 16
croon Heaven-sent lullabies
 17
 
 
I can finally put a name to
 18
what I see in your eyes
 19
every time
 20
 
 
you think I can save you
 21
 
 
Satan and I laugh at the irony
 22

27 Mar 07

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oh my gosh i love this. especially the last line. geez..this is a really good poem.
 — miss_minx

Hmm...interesting enough but it seemed to ramble, much like I am known to do sometimes. Work on it, and it some day may be liked by Edgar Allan Poe. He is the ultimate critic. Where is JustineCh by the way? 6/10
 — Henry

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