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Contributions to the world
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Are left unmarked
 2
Handed out in little packages unsigned
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To those who don't care
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And continue to use & abuse the system
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They are too lazy to work
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And too critical to see
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Who's really paying them
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People like me.
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Brought up on contributions, I really understand
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But get your lazy ass up
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And stop opening your hand.
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27 Mar 07


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