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beer can make you rite
chuckles

the children of the cornball
 1
comedy of errors found on my
 2
hard driving fast living it up
 3
to my eyeballs and strikes
 4
midnight turns into a pumpkin
 5
pie in the sky here's mud in your
 6
coffee mug for the cameras rolling
 7
thunder thighs and boneless breasts
 8
implants into memories of pain when
 9
i grimaced hamburglar rubblerubble
 10
take those flintstones multitasking
 11
be complex be active buzzing
 12
in the background noise white betty
 13
crockett and tubs of butter i can't
 14
believe you just said that that's
 15
the way uh huh i like it alot
 16
 
 
 
 
now get me another beer please
 17

26 Mar 07

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That was fun.
 — trafalgore

i knew this was you,

ur gobbledegook is always so intelligent.
=-)
 — unknown

that was cool, i like line 16
 — unknown

hahaha good time by all, eh?
that's all I have to say
and that's enough.
 — unknown

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