poetry critical

online poetry workshop



Age:Mind over Matter, if you dont mind, it doesnt matter.
LycanStorm

8/26/06 - written for someone i hadnt yet met...

Years between us, neither mind
 1
We both agree, it’s what’s inside.
 2
Our hearts and souls have intertwined
 3
Across space, throughout time.
 4
Destiny will decide our future
 5
Fate controls how far we venture.
 6
Whether friendship, love or lust
 7
We’ll follow our path, do what we must,
 8
But dreaming of you, it calms my soul
 9
You’ve enlightened me, opened my eyes ten-fold,
 10
Showed me the way, the path of light,
 11
Guided me to the strength inside.
 12
I wish I could do the same for you
 13
But everything I say is true
 14
You’ve changed my world, saved me from myself
 15
I only hope I’ve helped you through this hell
 16
Showed you the beauty that shines from within
 17
Love must be the eighth deadly sin
 18
The miles that separate us might as well be endlessly apart
 19
Someday we’ll be together; I know it in my heart
 20
Together forever, mind body and soul
 21
We’ll live for each other, stoke the coals
 22
Our souls will shine, brighter, hotter than an inferno
 23
We’ll keep each other going, through heaven, earth, and hell
 24
Together we’ll dance the silent dance, until the final toll of our death bell
 25

24 Mar 07


(define the words in this poem)
(7 more poems by this author)



Add A Comment:
Enter the following text to post as unknown: captcha

Comments:

0.401s