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Rhythm & Blues Headache
wanderlusted

Headaches bursting
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rhythm & blues.
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Throbbing beats pulse
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constricted veins;
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blood and notes flow
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straight from the heart.
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Wailing and moaning
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"Get me a guitar for my soul,
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ooooooh sweet child,
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and a wet rag for my head!"
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damn right you gotta live it to know it
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21 Mar 07

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you gotta suffer if you wanna sing the blues, or so i have been told.

nice little piece. great language. thoroughly enjoyed this.

thanks
i
 — ilenelush

ha.
yeah, gotta.
 — varun

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