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toyshops are breaking from the weapon - just for boys

so as they could kill all of these bad people
and in case boredom smash the rest
in the meantime
counteracting the social decay
or as a part of entertaining with anything their indefatigable handles
in frames of zen's fly on the rear sight
be aware
boys still don't believe in the death
nor  they are thinking about their beginning

18 Mar 07

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This is kind of cool, but the first line doesn't make a lot of sense. Theese bad? It feels really incomplete.
 — InMyBlood

not feeling it.

title is kind of okay.
 — PollyReg