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toyshops are breaking from the weapon - just for boys

suzej

so as they could kill all of these bad people	1
and in case boredom smash the rest	2

in the meantime	3
counteracting the social decay	4

or as a part of entertaining with anything their indefatigable handles	5

in frames of zen's fly on the rear sight	6

be aware	7

boys still don't believe in the death	8
nor they are thinking about their beginning	9

18 Mar 07

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This is kind of cool, but the first line doesn't make a lot of sense. Theese bad? It feels really incomplete.
— InMyBlood

not feeling it.

title is kind of okay.
— PollyReg

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