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A ray of a sun
CheBourdain7

A ray of a sun
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is often
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taken for granted.
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Like the skin
 4
of a banana
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shining
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in the middle
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of the night.
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It is but
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a curious
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blonde
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strolling
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by the beach
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in the evening hours
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of daylight
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savings time
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to which
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a horny
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sniper
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can
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detect.
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It is
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in Winter's eve,
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that we miss
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a drop
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of sunlight
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the most.
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Missing
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how
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it can turn
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lakes into
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vast
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paintings
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outdoors.
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18 Mar 07

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