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Utopia Street, 70
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I live in Utopia Dream,
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In Utopia Street at 70.
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Summer loving and act parade,
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in winter days sun kiss your hair.
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And I‘ve seen some things that could prove that I’m alive.
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I don’t believe in Time, I think it just doesn’t exist at all.
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I believe in a couple of eyes cut away from home.
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I see a million of words dancing in  heads
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Instead of heats they even don’t know they are signed on.
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It’s so simple to understand what’s real and what’s not.
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I don’t believe in writing letters, they look so strange when I stare;
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I feel so naked when I am not wearing my brain in front of you.
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I don’t believe in religions cause they sounds so obviously fake to me
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but listen,
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I’m not criticizing your way, I’m just explaining mine.
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15 Mar 07

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yikes...not really saying much...diary entry central...
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