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there is a heart
way down there
i swear it
i said reach in and
grab it see i
told you put it
back i need that
she said my word
it dont cut it had to
feel it had to
wipe her hands
with a napkin
dont blame me
sometimes i wanna
see hers wanna
squeeze it that's ok
i know its there

13 Mar 07

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i like how you brought out the character of the speaker. nicely and understated.
 — bowiegirl