a priest named me the devil |
caustic
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I smile
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You look at me
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with the eyes of a child
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who just found out
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the monster under the bed is real
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and it's fucking mommy
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The priest was right
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12 Mar 07 |
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"You look at me 2
with the eyes of a child 3
who just found out 4
the monster under the bed is real"
Excellent simile. The rest doesn't do it for me but I probably don't understand it. Care to elaborate?
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— musicwords
haha, what pray tell did the preist have to say?
— bowiegirl
he called me the devil because i unknowingly tempted my boyfriend into breaking his lent promise... which i found highly entertaining, actually
— caustic
Again...another one that makes me giggles ^_^
— totalyLost
Took me a while to get this but now I do I think it''s very clever, you wicked woman you, lol
— angrychick
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