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FUCKED!
DICE

Stepped outside the box of madness
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looking for light.
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Found the universe’s biggest bulb
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to be way too bright.
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His hand rose to his face
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and he was shocked by what he felt.
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His eyes had fallen out of place,
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his sun drenched face began to melt.
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He rushed back inside trying to cool down
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too late, his skin dripped, dropped to the ground.
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Quickly he got on his knees hands moving fast,
 11
collecting his flesh.
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Did he really think he could leave so fast?
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While the wound was still fresh?
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And his ears still rang from the blast?
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While picking up his skin from the carpet,
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all he could think of was why.
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He was a wise man
 18
and knew he was dead
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knew it didn’t take a bullet in the head
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for him to die.
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Though he put his eyes back in place
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and patched up his flesh.
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He new there was no chance for anew
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no way in hell he could ever start fresh.
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But what could he do? it wasn’t his fault,
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she lied, she cried:
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what he now knew were fake tears.
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She gave herself to the world;
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all the while she stopped being his.
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While thinking of this,
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and looking at her body lifeless
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his rage went away, his answers became clear.
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She was a whore! that’s what she was!
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Although for four months she gave him none,
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she fucked the whole world!
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and tonight since he happened to walk in
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she fucked him too!
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I don't know what to title it!

10 Mar 07


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some times i feel like this poem i loved it, it was amazing great work!!!
 — writenbylove

its pretty dull stuff
 — Mongrol

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