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Greek Music
sparrow

Strangely off -
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  beat vocalists in their own
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     rhythm quivering
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        voices in passion
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       ringing.
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10 Mar 07

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hm
 — photobooth

hm... says more than a thousand words;-)
 — sparrow

This is really a waste of this grand website's space. Delete it when you get the chance. Oh, and read some Poe. 4/10
 — Henry

I have just nominated you as poet of the week Sparrow. Congratulations.
 — Henry

Henry.

I wrote this poem in the summer. It was an experiment with the uneven structure of greek music. an attempt in writing abstract poetry.

I will not delete it.

constructive criticism, however, is always welcome...maybe you should try it sometime.
 — sparrow

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