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Spring 2007 is quintessentially you
skyline

Make me laugh with your alabaster
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erotic firguerines,
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your puerile humour,
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good taste- you disregard as rumour
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in your off-kilter jokes
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the best that you can muster.
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Go on: Tease my impassive mouth into a smile
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with your hopeless inability to compile
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a basic text without serious error.
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The English you devise, the linguists terror!
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I remember once, aided by predictive text,
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you tried to say you’d like to see me in less
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and ‘lacy lingerie’ became ‘laundere’
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it tickles me how distinctively you err!
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And I truly believe possible the strangest things
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when you tell with such conviction
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your unadulterated dreams,
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so that I really could have faith in love
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and luck, and life, without the rub.
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So make me laugh with your percolator
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coffee (that you murder),
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with your alligator
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shoes
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(that you swear all straight men wear)
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All your idiosyncrasies without compare.
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7 Mar 07

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firguerines?  Take off the "first letter cap" function on your computer.
off-kilter

It's tough to tell where your thoughts begin and end since you have not made much use of periods at the end of things.  

Lines 18-25 are just too fluffy and I can't make sense of them.  Did you mean to say "coffee that your murder?"  

I sense the arrogant laughter at this pompous person's expense but it's really hard to tell what the actual impact of this poem should be.  
 — Isabelle5

I wanted this to come across as more of a  tender  tone than an arrogant mocking one so I wonder if it has a different impact on anyone else.
 — skyline

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