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the drawers have all been broken into
 1
we've lost our dynamics on how to downplay the situation
 2
we were looking for old love letters written in haste
 3
and maybe bar tabs with bragging rights to prove
 4
to tell us
 5
two drinks were ordered for the blonde
 6
and one for the brunette
 7
only one was led to a dark room
 8
we're the vixen, the manic, and the savior
 9
of a small interaction
 10
that's somehow going to show the world
 11
deceit is global
 12
this is scene infinity of our claim to fame
 13
an affinity of untapped potential
 14
he had an impressive array of disguises
 15
i never lost my desire for appeal
 16
that i didn't have
 17
but she always did
 18
no one knows who the villian is
 19
but we all wanted control
 20

4 Mar 07


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