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Twisted Dreams
ashley87

Yet another work in progress. Constructive criticism is welcome, and much wanted.

I'm sick of lies
 1
Leave me be
 2
I'm dying
 3
Can't you see
 4
I don't want your lies
 5
Your false lullabies
 6
I want permanent dreams
 7
Muffle my screams
 8
 
 
In this world
 9
Rain is blood
 10
Tears of my soul
 11
Continueously flood
 12
Craft me wings
 13
So I can fly
 14
Away from this
 15
False lullaby
 16
 
 
Scar the sun
 17
Blot the moon
 18
And dance within
 19
This twisted tune
 20
Tear my hair
 21
Bind my wrists
 22
Acid tears
 23
Burn my face
 24
Take me from
 25
This darkened place
 26
 
 
Slumber
 27
Dreams
 28
Midnight screams
 29
All reflected
 30
Reality
 31
 
 
I can't stop the burning
 32
I can't stop the pain
 33
The only solace
 34
Soothing rain
 35
Thoughts escaping
 36
Mind is racing
 37
I hope for the end
 38
End it now
 39
 
 
 
 
The tears I dam up
 40
They overflow
 41
Soak up the blood
 42
The tears
 43
All my fears
 44
Oh my twisted dreams
 45

3 Mar 07


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