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Leaking Barrage
MattPat

Leaking barrage—belligerent blues—
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On outfits of fit-fits and hourglass shoes,
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Taking their time, on getting me here,
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And getting me there, where the sky meets the moon
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On a sinking ship that comes and goes
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Waxing and waning with light of the day—
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Taking and giving (pushing the pull)
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As good girls and bad girls keep coming away,
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Keep pushing me down, and loving me too;
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I’ve always been one, and now that I’m two;
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It’s been, and it’s been a hard time for me
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Keeping in mind the scolding or care of a woman that’s caring for free;
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And ay, to the wind and ay to the sun,
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To the stars, the summer and fall.
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Branches now spring from my hands
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And the sap is dripping from them
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My heart is a mess, my mind cannot stress
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Yes, (the trials of love have been killing me)
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I am growing away from my self
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It’s a good thing in fact, but a fact I can’t face
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So my face has been turned to a leaf.
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Now falling from there, and falling from faith—
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Where’s been the summer and fall? —
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And all and all, where the breezes been call
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And a bird is singing its song:
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Beeeeeeeeep beeep beeeeeeeep chirp!
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1 Mar 07


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