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fromage-anelle
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I love your heart-felt poetries...
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they melt the marble in my brain
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O how your wit flows with such ease!
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With fragrant tease and touch of sleaze
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we'll shred our bed for creaming gain
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I love your heart-felt poetries...
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Your lactose sensitivities
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make curds of turds, and brown-pours reign
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O how your wit flows with such ease!
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My ears you please with lusty wheeze
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my head is fed this soft refrain
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I love your heart-felt poetries...
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On knees I seize your tensing trees
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and dip my lips- a fondu feign
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O how your wit flows with such ease!
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I hear your name upon a breeze
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that soothes my old and grating pain
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I love your heart-felt poetries...
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O how your wit flows with such ease!
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26 Feb 07

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Comments:

This was well written, but I think the use of O is a bit much. Too Shakesperian...not enough Poean. 8/10
 — Henry

Poean...

that's great
 — unknown

supersexy RBB.
 — unknown

I enjoyed this very much.

and... poean made me laugh :-)
 — likeavirus

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