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kids...

Rozzo

"go away" she says,	1
with a rediculously large	2
grin on her face;	3
her eyes making crestent moons.	4
scract that, "pretty rainbows."	5

"ppp, i farted on you!",	6
its from being around those	7
boys.	8
those boys...	9

don't leave the room	10
'Rozzie Pozzie', if you do,	11
i'll make a guilty one out	12
of you.	13

don't cry, child,	14
don't cry.	15

i wouldn't dare leave,	16
wouldn't dare.	17

its odd that i apprichiate	18
the fact she brings new diapers	19
to me.	20
shes not a liar, no, not she.	21

she wont remember being two,	22
i'll remember for her though -	23
especially because she made so	24
many memories for me.	25

i was a kid too, and yeah,	26
i'll get old. if i'm lucky, have one	27
of you. a kid, like you.	28

sissy, i promise not to take you	29
for granted.	30

thrown together with her on my lap

24 Feb 07

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Seriously, the spelling here makes the poem unreadable.
ridiculously (2)
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it's (7)
it's (18)
appreciate (18)
she's (21)
— unknown

Spelling. Seriously, fix the spelling. Computers always have spellcheck, USE IT.
— ashley87

I third the spelling comments.
— rocket

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