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wife says i can't be drunk at 11:30 in the morning
unknown

is that written
 1
in some book of consequence?
 2
or did oprah squeeze another edict
 3
from her cavernous
 4
hatchet-wound?
 5
 
 
you're scaring me justin,
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this is disgusting,
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look at yourself!
 8
this has to stop.
 9
 
 
no, no baby,
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you don't understand,
 11
this fortifies me against the boogeyman
 12
and other limitations
 13
of circumstance.
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she slams the door
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in my face
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and stomps away.
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i fling it open
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charge after her,
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come here baby!
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i'll slam it up your ass
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and make things copacetic.
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i'll even plow
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your root
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with my tongue.
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she starts shaking
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and crying
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on the bed.
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i hold my junk
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in my hand
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and point it at her face
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bam! pow! zap!
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see baby!
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he's hungry,
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ready to fire!
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she sprints from the room
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grabs my son
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and they disappear
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out the front door.
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i flip a new bottle
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and stand at the window.
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the sun
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is mid sky,
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stench of a thousand
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dead civilizations
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upon me
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and i feel
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the ancient urge
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to gore a bitch
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more understanding
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than my wife.
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24 Feb 07

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i need some to think up a proper comment after reading this four times.
 — WordsAndMe

wow you really let rip, but in an intelliigent and understandable manner. I know the feeling you describe. Thank you for posting.
 — unknown

i've been there and done it, so by that i have proven your title wrong. as for the poem, i simply didn't get why half of the words were needed. far too excessive.
 — Esoteric

no doze d.
 — unknown

this is crap
 — Mongrol

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