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for the flowers of will.
varun

waves try and hold me
 1
down;
 2
 
 
sprinkled violin notes
 3
tickle crests - pianos
 4
split day and night -
 5
flutes whistle, wailing
 6
like sirens.
 7
 
 
every kaleidoscope of self
 8
resurfaces in moments
 9
of weakness - every separation
 10
a thorn. every unsung lyric,
 11
another;
 12
 
 
every boundary fades. gaze
 13
travels in circles, spirals,
 14
falls to return, dreaming
 15
of a flower floating
 16
in mid-ocean.
 17
 
 
imprinted
 18
on untouched beaches,
 19
 
 
i run
 20
faster, breathing
 21
quick and deep -
 22
heart stops
 23
for a moment, caught
 24
by the vision of my eyes
 25
set on the sun.
 26

24 Feb 07


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