| Magic Bed, Special Dreams |
Isabelle5
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My bed expands at night,
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stretches out to realms
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unseen beneath the sun.
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My toes touch sands
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not made by mountains
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on any human map
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and there are special dreams
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when lovemaking
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with handsome men
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is just as real
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as when I am awake –
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I wake relaxed,
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my hands above the sheets,
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purring like a cat,
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humming songs
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no man will ever hear,
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in a bed, small and snug
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and big enough for one.
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23 Feb 07 |
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Wow. Now here's something worth reading from a real person. So many poems about dreams on this site, but this is the only one I ever liked.
— icepineapple
Isabelle5 you have scored again!
— icepineapple
this poem rox. it makes me sleepy too, lol
— unknown
Oh, I was revising while you read it. I wonder what you saw while I was doing that! You are fast readers! Thank you!
— Isabelle5
Isabelle, this is why I'm a big fan of yours.
You manage to bring dreams, humour, and even love into poetry and it never feels forced, fake, or cliché.
I honestly don't know why I haven't favourited all your work.
Teo.
— teo_omega11
This is mostly forced and cliche ------- I won't say its fake. You are probably very scincere.
— unknown
Isabelle
You are a star. Your poetry conjures up so much. Apologies for taking off my latest effort "Gunpowder By The Fire" along with your comment as it was such a pile of poo i couldn't stand to see it sitting in my file any longer.
Larry sick and fed up Lark
— larrylark
Besides the bit about moutains making sand - this is gold.
— WordsAndMe
Well Issie, I come to see if I can rip your poem apart since thats all you have been doing to mine when I started posting again, but I can't because it is impossible. I wish you would read something of mine you like and post on it instead of reading everthing you hate. Ha ha, I know there has to be one new poem I wrote that is appealing to you. If I could, I would write to you and only you to get your criticism.
-Drew
— Him
Isabelle, you fascinate me.
Very well done.
-FF
— For_Forsaken
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