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Get Comfortable
krookedsk8r

I have done it again
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this place is feeling like home
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and when I leave again
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it will only be a feild trip
 4
 
 
but you have the view
 5
you should see the way
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the world spin from here
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the way the people
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spill their souls out
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on cracked stained sidewalks
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but the smiles they keep
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while they slide
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their suddle blades across
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the place
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where the your spine used to be
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everyone one running backwards
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in slow motion
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with their eyes closed
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just happy to be on their feet
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but I lie here
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with back on rock bottom
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but its the only thing in the world
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that doesnt fall apart
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now my eyes are open
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and my legs have no where to be
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I feel almost content
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so i sit here
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and write my tombstone
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"Here lies a boy, who
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laid on stained sidewalks
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because he figured out the world"
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but you can't blame me
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home is where
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the heart is
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20 Feb 07


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