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I Can't Help the Way the World Turns
krookedsk8r

even the brightest sun sets
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even the darkest clouds pass
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all that ever stays is love
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and who needs that
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I need a sun that refuses to set
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and a cloud who has the guts
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to run the world
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because maybe I
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am done watching them
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fight over the sky
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maybe i should except the
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fact they both can't win
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and sometimes
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its hard
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to just stare at the sun
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and when the clouds are this
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dark it easy to forget
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why
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love refuses pass
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or fade in to the
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horizon
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and accept its fate
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20 Feb 07

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