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Rugs
aerol

I acquired some rugs,
 1
paid for with my dignity.
 2
Later I found that
 3
they were not persian,
 4
after all.
 5

2005

20 Feb 07


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Not quite sure what I think of this. I would suggest adding 'recently' at the end of L1.
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