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wicker chick
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wicker chick
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with shaven head
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fire in her eyes
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burned through her soul
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ate her inside out
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till she had to brand
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her head
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her hand
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sacrifice her body
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to the soul-sucking world
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19 Feb 07

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doesn't really go anywhere or say anything. Except you need to LIGHTEN UP baby!
 — unknown

poor brit...
 — unknown

what exactly is wicker, I thought it was a type of furnature/basket material, what has it got to do with Britney? Didn't get that till I saw the comment, but maybe the comment is wrong.
 — unknown

This is a true masterpiece and I wouldn't suggest that you change a darn thing. Beautiful as it is. I hope you don't mind if I share this with my friends? I'm sure they'll love it as much as I do. 4/10
 — Henry

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