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So, if I was a superhero
Him

So, if I was a superhero I would call
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myself, Magnet Man!!  I mean I wouldn’t
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have any real super powers I would just
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metaphorically compare what’s going on
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with a magnet. For example, I would have
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a positive charge, here is the catch, everyone
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has a positive charge, and everyone knows
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that two of the same charges repel. So, I can’t
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really get close to anyone, but.. This is where
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it gets fun because its almost like it is literal,
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everything negative about them connects to
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me. So you probably wouldn’t see me in a
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comic book, I don’t think they write about
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superheroes like me. Now as I get older I
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realize that I can change my charge to
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negative, its just really hard. I do this
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sometimes but lately I have been stuck on
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positive. I just wish these currents weren’t
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so strong. Maybe it would be easier if I didn’t
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have that much of a magnetic field anyway.
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So when I lose my power would I ever
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be connected to anyone again?
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19 Feb 07

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:)
 — Mongrol

Ha, You're messing with me. I wouldn't flirt to much because you cannot get close to me, unless everything good about you has a negative charge?

-Drew
 — Him

yes and no
 — Mongrol

Yes as in you are messing with me and no as in you are not flirting with me?
-Drew
 — Him

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