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i kiss you as you read a book that you love and we fly over chicago during winter
peanut

your smile dazzles each sunbeam
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as it races its way towards
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gracing the slopes of your lips
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parting thoughtfully and
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soft as snow.
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19 Feb 07


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I love the title...
wish the poem was a bit of an elaboration of it.
but all good words.
 — meghanmidget

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