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Just.. Stop.
unknown

A thought stream..

How much the villain am I?
 1
When all that is yearned for
 2
is all that I seek
 3
and All
 4
that is sought
 5
is I
 6
Am
 7
the thoughts that assail me?
 8
Sanctioning their rotation
 9
aggravation to elation
 10
the story I believe
 11
my Self to Be
 12
yet none of it
 13
is Me.
 14
 
 
How much the scourge am I?
 15
When the rapture and rage passes by
 16
paralysis, suffocate
 17
My horror, My pain
 18
I entertain
 19
perversely
 20
the lie
 21
that All
 22
is Me
 23
yet I remain.  Here
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Am I
 25
I Am
 26
seeking the sound and fury
 27
regret and remorse collapse me
 28
Still
 29
this too
 30
goes by.
 31
 
 
How much the Love am I?
 32
As I breathe in a tangerine sky
 33
and My feet infiltrate tidal loam,
 34
who am I?
 35
Dark and Light
 36
Love - hate; good - evil; doubt - belief.
 37
Peace and violence
 38
shame
 39
and Innocence
 40
all Truth already known
 41
Still
 42
what lies beneath
 43
Me
 44
No thing, Now here,
 45
a Master, a Mentor, a Seer
 46
as it is below
 47
so it is above
 48
Existence tells us so.
 49
We are needed
 50
for Life and I
 51
I am
 52
Love
 53
alone.
 54

18 Feb 07

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Sorry...this is horrible. I know you just put it up, but this is abysmal. I did enjoy your whimsical rhyme. a 9/10 for that.
 — Henry

Thank you kindly :D
 — unknown

I get it, but there wont be too many that do.  This is terrific, unknown & makes you think about who we really are (10)
 — unknown

Thanks for reading and for understanding and for your feeback, Unknown above ^
 — unknown

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