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Hard to work
Stellaella

Hard to work
 1
when I see my efforts
 2
melting into the walls
 3
and see myself
 4
shining white and faceless
 5
in the mirror.
 6
 
 
Do I like it here?
 7
As much as the last volunteer.
 8

18 Feb 07

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What about changing the title to "Volunteer" and dropping the last line?

Also, perhaps dropping another word or two: ie.

Volunteer

My efforts
melting into walls.
Myself
shining white,
faceless in the mirror.

Do I like it here?
 — shallee

Line 1 is redundant - considering the title.
 — PollyReg

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