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Before Existential Angst
wanderlusted

The minuscule girl with an oversized red hat
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whisked away by brisk winds,
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The teeny-bopper that <3ed Leo,
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The idealistic student lusting over
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medical school and, sigh, her teacher,
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The Southern debutante that lost her way
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in a big ol' concrete metropolis,
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The health nut begging her will
 8
for a Big Mac and cigarette,
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The young woman that had yet to grasp
 10
the seriousness of death.
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At times silhouettes appear at the door of my mind,
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reminding me of moments in my life when I was better than myself.
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18 Feb 07

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Too short. Seems more like an act in futility than existentialism.
 — Andramelach

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