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10 good years...
ROTAXJOHON

My life is a thin veneer of thought
 1
A body carried through…but only that
 2
Performing the duties life has taught
 3
along an allotted track
 4
 
 
Praying for but ten good years
 5
I eagerly await His grace
 6
to remove the ever-present fears
 7
which etch lines upon my face
 8
 
 
Who would know who haven’t felt
 9
the vagaries of head that heels
 10
and lists about while the storm’s in port
 11
despite all appeals
 12
 
 
Truth be told, the Word won’t come
 13
I’m alone in this life of mine
 14
Electrons whirl and here I am
 15
it is my actions that define
 16
 
 
My life is a thin veneer of thought
 17
A body carried through…but only that
 18
Performing the duties life has taught
 19
Along an allotted track
 20

17 Feb 07


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