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w               w  
 1
  
 2
         o
 3
 
 
   r          r
 4
 
 
d                d
 5
 
 
         o
 6
 
 
   r           r
 7
 
 
w               w
 8
 
 
         o
 9
 
 
   r           r
 10
 
 
 
 
d                d
 11
 
 
         o
 12
 
 
   r          r
 13
 
 
 
 
w                w
 14
 
 
         o
 15
 
 
   r           r
 16
 
 
 
 
d                 d
 17

        

          

         dna

17 Feb 07

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what
 — Esoteric

the
 — Esoteric

fuck
 — Esoteric

a helix of dna  = transmission of language? no?
 — unknown

  s
    u
       c
          k
            ;   s       &nb sp;

            ;   bigtime
 — unknown

nice idea.
but why the 'or' between 'word' and 'word'?
 — varun

get rid of the footnote
 — varun

i like the insinuation that each 'word', even the 'or' can have two seperate meanings.
sort of a direction that 'it can take'. mmm.
 — varun
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