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innatentive... is one poorly misspelled word... would u rather say unintended? or inattentive... which isnt an actual word, but can be misinterpreted as one...
Also the poem has a good idea, but wasn't well written. The thoughhts are too disconnected.... along with breaking the pace of the poem...
inattentive - needs another t.
Because you've given this short piece no white spaces, you really need the missing punctuation. Without it, some of the lines do not make sense on first read.
I want to like this. I can see glimmers but it is not done yet, I think.