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Outgrowning childhood, growing into Woman-hood. Tis a beautiful thing...

Mothers don’t like me
 1
Fathers want me
 2
Girls hate me
 3
Guys love me.
 4
 
 
I’m a bad influence
 5
This makes perfect sense,
 6
I’m the original She-Devil
 7
Purely evil.
 8
 
 
That’s what they think
 9
see, I am that missing link.
 10
I make them run
 11
all I want is to have a little fun.
 12
 
 
This isn’t the way it used to be
 13
Come and you’ll see,
 14
What they say I am.
 15
I am a lover
 16
and a fighter,
 17
A sucker
 18
And a biter,
 19
Love to be hurt
 20
And to make a man work,
 21
Can’t help what I am
 22
I’m a bad girl so punish me,
 23
Spank me,
 24
Tie me up.
 25
 
 
I love to be a little dirty
 26
More than just flirty,
 27
Being bad is good,
 28
It makes boys hard as wood.
 29
Bad girls have all the fun
 30
All we do can’t be undone
 31
The boys love it too much
 32
Something about our sultry touch
 33
 
 
I was their perfectly modest angel,
 34
but I’m not now as you can tell
 35
Every male that walks by falls under my spell
 36
I enjoy placing them in my cell.
 37
 
 
The prudent ask if I feel shame
 38
I answer them simply and say,
 39
'No, I am wild and will not be tame,
 40
My erotic fantasies I freely obey.'
 41
 
 
I am a good girl gone bad
 42
isn't that sad?
 43
Sadly, I like what I have become.
 44
Love the ability to make men cum.
 45
Is that wrong?
 46
No, I've waited too long,
 47
Finally I am what I wish to be
 48
Freely me.
 49

15 Feb 07


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This gave me a chuckle!

I'm going to assume you are somewhere in the order of fifteen, or that the Author is extremely clever, being able to walk a poem in those shoes.  It's so young, it's cute.  No rating, but I hope you continue to write :)
 — unknown

:)
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Over all, your poems, I love the style.  They flow extremley well.
 — meghanmidget

Actually I'm older than that, but thank you for the comment.  
meghanmidget
Thank you very much.
 — Unbelievable

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